Thursday, January 12, 2017

Seamonster

I did finish my website design, but I don't like it lol so I am going to redo, not like I don't have enough to do as it is.

This is the start of the sketch for the background/main menu. I already see things I need to change in order for my idea to work. I do think this will be a better representation of me when finished. I don't mind the finished site, but it needs work.

The site is here, http://jenniferphillip.businesscatalyst.com/index.html And it goes right to the art but I just feel it needs something a bit more flashier but not headache inducing.

5 comments:

Julie Ford Oliver said...

I really like how this sketch is going and wondered what part you were not pleased with?
I will check the link.

Shashi Nayagam said...

I like this drawing and wondering what you don't like about. your site is cool. Is it more colour you are looking for in the background?

Jennifer Rose Phillip said...

Julie, I like the sketch, I just need to change the angles of a few things

Shashi, yeah, probably think it needs more colour. Simple colour scheme can wok, but this is maybe a bit too simple

Michelle B. Hendry said...

Love the sketch!
The website does needs some tweaking. I noticed the first issue while trying to look at it on a mobile device. in my opinion, the font is too heavy and doesn't suit the logo, which i really like. The neutral color is good. You want the portfolio to pop! The poster with cars! Love! Great work..... :) and you didn't ask for a critique... lol!

Jennifer Rose Phillip said...

thanks for the crit Michelle :) yeah the mobile site never got finished and since I plan on redoing the site, didn't see the point lol I actually didn't get that good of a grade for that poster lol